Tuesday, October 14, 2008

I Wish

I wish there was a law that said all people had to stay in there own business. This would be a good law because people need to stay mind their own business.

I think that this would be a good law because all this causes is conflict between people. People dont like when people get in their business if people wanted other people to know what is going on in their life then they would tell you. I think that people would get along much better if they would be so kind to stay in their own life. I guess this law would never happen but if it did it would be AMAZING!!!!

1 comment:

mrs. jenkins said...

That would be very nice, wouldn't it? I must say, I think we are all guilty of this at one point in our lives or another. But it sure would be easier if we all just minded our own business, huh? I don't think this is human nature, however. So, we just have to live with it.

You have a couple of run-on sentences in your paragraph, and they really can take away from the meaning of your writing so be very aware of those in the future.